===== Language is too Flowery ===== The verbiage in the Player's Guide is way too verbose and appears written to show off the author's ability to use flowery language.

===== Lore ===== The whole thing is based on a canon world with it's own lore. That's fine for a one-off game you play once or twice, but it is too inflexible.

===== D20 roll under skill checks ===== This is simple and easy but doesn't reflect the idea that challenges can have varying difficulties. An example would be that jumping across a 5 foot wide chasm is essentially the same challenge as jumping across a 20 foot wide chasm.